Strengths: Tom thought that my blog was well detailed, and that I have a lot of videos and pictures. He also thinks that I have quite a bit of writing.
Weaknesses: Tom said although my blog is good, I need more sub headings to stop making everything look like mini essays.
I agree that I need to add sub headings, because I do have mini essays but if I were to add headings to each section then everything won't look to long, as I would have labels for the important things. I also have lots of pictures and videos like he said and I think these videos and pictures will help me to plan ahead of my work.
I am going to listen to the points that Tom has made, and take them on board to achieve the best I can.
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